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  It seems that every country, race, and religion observe some type of holiday or festival. The two most celebrating holidays __1__ in the North and South America, Australia and Eueope, and in the most of Christian world are Christmas and Easter. __2__ Christians celebrate the birth of Christ on Christmas. The __3__ exchange of gifts rises from the birthday tradition. The __4__ winter holiday season is time for bright colored lights to __5__ appear in and out the houses, on Christmas trees, and on __6__ buildings and storefronts, At Easter, Christians celebrate the death, burial, and resurrection of Christ. This is also a time for celebration with family.A non-religious celebration in North America is Thanksgiving.Similarly, National Day and Labour Day Holidays are among the non-religious holidays in China. A common tradition is the observance of the New Year as celebrated around the world on January 1st. Therefore, various religious groups celebrate the __7__ New Year on the spring or fall. One common thread that __8__ goes through all these holidays is the celebration of the __9__ occasion with family, food, new clothing, lights, and festivity.They are set apart as special times to be celebrated happily with family and friends. Religious or not religious, each festival or holiday has its own legend or origin behind. __10__
  答案:
  1.celebrating--celebrated.根据意思可以判断这里用的是celebrate的被动意义,“被人们庆祝的”。
  2.the--/.“在大部分信奉基督教的地方”用in most of Christian world,most在此处不是最高级,前面不需要定冠词。
  3.on--at.on Christmas中的介词on应改为at。at Christmas是固定搭配。
  4.rises--arises.这里文中想要表达的意思是交换礼物是由于人们过生日时的传统产生的,而固定搭配arise from正是“因某事物而产生、造成、引起”。如:Are there any matters arising from the the minutes of the last meeting?
  5.^time--a.time在这里的意思是“时刻”,  6.out--outside;out^--of.out是副词不是介词,  7.Therefore--However.根据上下文判定,这里应该是转折的衔接关系,而不是因果关系。
  8.on--in.在某个季节应该用介词in。
  9.goes--runs.根据上下文的意思,这里是说“贯穿于这些节日的一条主线”,固定搭配run through 可表达这个意思,而go through的用法中没有此项含义。
  10.behind^--it.behind 在此处作介词用,后面需要一个成分,所以用指示代词it指代前面的festival or holiday。